Design Research Dissertation / Draft Dissertation


29.8.2022- 3.10.2022 (Week 1 - Week 6)
Cheryl Voo Yie Qi / 0349878
Design Research Dissertation / Bachelor of Design in Creative Media
Research Implementation / Draft Dissertation


LECTURES

Week 1




Week 2




Week 3




Week 4 & 5




Week 6





INSTRUCTIONS



Week 1
  • Work on the literature review matrix with the notes given in Google classroom.
  • Structure out the sections.


Fig 1.1, Literature review matrix


Week 2-6
Continue work on:

  • Literature review
  • Methodology
  • Result and Discussion
  • Conclusion
  • Abstract
  • Introduction

Here's the first draft dissertation:


Fig 1.2, First draft dissertation 


After getting feedback from Dr. Hayati, I revised it and create a new draft:


Fig 1.3, Final draft dissertation 



FEEDBACK

Week 2

- Don't amend the draft we did, write a new one besides the original one.

- Read the articles again to develop more suitable sub-topics.


Week 3

- The title should be changed to “UX design for educational mobile application with reference to the English language”. - Shouldn’t be limited to only secondary school students since everyone can use the English language learning application.


Week 4

- It is possible to add figures/diagrams to the draft dissertation.

- Update the weekly progress and reflection sheet as soon as possible when the memories
are still new.

- Provide reasons for the research method section.

- Citation needs to be correct (no need to write the pages) 

- Try to write more deeper, it is too brief in the literature review and methodology.


Week 5

- Don’t assume readers know what you are writing.

- Read again from a reader’s perspective.

- Can change the use of some words in findings and analysis.


Week 6

- Remember to update the weekly progression sheet.

- Discussion is about combining section 2 (Literature review) and section 4 (Findings and Analysis).

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